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To See the Soul Within her eyes

06:18 Jan 26 2017
Times Read: 332


grant to me a piece of your eternity

so i can cast away, all of my calamities

kiss my lips again my love, touch my soul again

before the world is consumed and burned by sin

let me just for once, see inside your eyes

let me see your beauty, before the moment dies


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DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
02:03 Feb 02 2017

Wonderful piece nicely written





 

The Raven and the Swan

00:50 Jan 25 2017
Times Read: 348


Beyond the woods of misty vale, begins a truly tragic tale

two were said to live within, a cottage made of stone

but once the darkness had set in, the woman left him all alone

into the forest she set out, to leave the lazy, drunken lout

unawareness in her mind, shed left her saftey far behind

the man in anger followed fast, unaware that hed run past

a tall and hounting set of bones, wedged between two larger stones

at his pace in hot pursuit, his former bride in mind to shoot

unaware that hed just met, a gaunt and haunting silhouette

the specter reached a hand to grab the brute, his very soul the reaper's loot.

the bride had heard the violent scream, and ponder at what it could mean

what dark fate rallied his demise? she gazed into the foggy skies

in doing so she lost her head, the reaper there had struck her dead

the bodies soon were found at dawn, his: a raven, hers: a swan

without a word the two were buried, wing in wing, like they were married

and as the sun shone in the vale, t'was seen a lonesome figure pale

no spoken word was made, as he guarded grave where they were laid

and misty vale then was cursed. darkness fell and light dispersed

the town of wonder fell to shame, knowing they were all to blame

eternal night then took the town. their souls were lost and never found


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DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
02:09 Feb 02 2017

Sad an beautiful very moving piece indeed bravo indeed a great poem.





 

The Dark Gift

01:48 Jan 24 2017
Times Read: 365


grant to me the kiss of death

and walk with me at night.

no longer have i need of breath

nor will i jump in fright.

give to me the dark gift

and cast away the sun

bring to me your love so swift

make me your only one


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DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
02:04 Feb 02 2017

This one I just love it moves me thank you writing this one.





 

The Pale Maiden

11:14 Jan 23 2017
Times Read: 370


once upon a time

in a land not far away

within a stony sepulcher

a sleeping maiden lay

swabbed in garb of green and blue

her hair as black as night

her skin a pale hue

when her eyes had shut

with no more light to give

the village laid her body down

and thought she did not live

but when the garish light of sun

cast its final light

the maiden's eyes would open wide

and she'd ascend into the night


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DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
02:02 Feb 02 2017

I love this piece it's beautiful well done indeed.








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